Little tired Pip

Commission for ... just kidding, but I love when there is "commission" written under a pic. It allways means the author had to try its best, which is often awesome.
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Velvet Remedy: You should rest now, Littlepip. You saved many lives today.
Little Pip: I .... I can't ....
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So, here it is. After about a week of non-stop drawing, erasing and redrawing, here it is.
Still not perfect, as others tell me
Also, you tell me why it isn't please

I wanted to draw something of Fa:E since i finished reading it. This is the first one; I tried to be accurate, so tell me if there is something you call "odd".
Also, ATG week "pony recovering" gave me this idea for for my first Fa:E pic.

Process of drawing [link]

Fa:E (c) KKat [link]
Fallout Equestria is one of the best readings EVER. And yes, I mean it. Not many books can make me read 10 hours without breaks ...
(thanks a lot for this awesome story, one of the best I have ever read. But you didn't have to make me cry so much ... )

Inspiration: + also evry single Fa:E picture tha existed.
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EQD